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ravenqueen55 ([info]ravenqueen55) wrote,
@ 2007-09-01 00:05:00

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Current location:My computer room
Current mood: porny
Current music:The pitter patter of the rain on my window...very relaxing!
Entry tags:bbtp, hard

BRING BACK THE PORN IS UPON US!!! REJOICE!!!

Well folks, here it is. My entry for this momentous occasion, dedicated to the_minx_17.  Hope you all like it!

Title: Hard

Author: ravenqueen55

Pairing: H/D (like anyone really had to ask)

Rating: NC-17ish

Summary: Draco’s been bad, and Harry’s in a punishing mood...which is just the way Draco likes him. 

Warnings: Violence of the BDSM type. Oh, and I might have used the f-word a few times, and, oh, yeah ~ no sign whatsoever of anything resembling a plot.

Additional Warnings: Just to let you know…what I wrote is nothing like what I rec. It’s a little more…kinky. Just sayin’…

Word Count: 116

Disclaimer: The boys were created by J.K., and I love her for it. I make no money from this (and not much from my real job, either, come to think of it…)

Author’s Notes: Yes, I know ~ I normally rec. I am, however, a writer at heart, so for this special occasion I give you my first H/D drabble ever…written specifically for Bring Back the P0rn. I totally blame the_minx_17 for the kinky factor ~ I wrote this in about 10 minutes after reading her post about BBtP and, well, ‘kinky’ and ‘the minx’ go together in my brain, so when I started writing, this happened…*shrugs* But it’s fitting, I believe ~ if I’m going to post something for Bring Back the P0rn day, I might as well go all out…



HARD

Gods, what had he done to deserve this?  His skin was red; sore; swollen.  Every movement, every breath, every fucking thought brought more pain.  And it wasn't over.  Not even close.  The punishment kept going on and on and on...

The flogger came down hard.

Fuck.

Hard.

It kept coming.  He jumped.  Moaned.  Cried.

"Hmmm...Draco.  I like it when you cry.  You like it, too, don't you?"

Hard.

"Slut."

Hard.

"I'm so fucking pissed at you.  You have no idea.  This won't stop until I say."

Gods, what had he done to deserve this?  He'd be sure to ask Harry later, because one thing was certain...whatever it was, he fucking well wanted to do it again.

fin

 



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[info]romaine24
2007-09-01 03:34 am UTC (link)
Whoa! Romaine looks at the penname one more time after reading the drabble. And why doesn't my favourite rec'er write? Great drabble, and perfect to start off the day.

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[info]ravenqueen55
2007-09-01 03:43 am UTC (link)
I'm your favourite rec'er??? *bats lashes* I feel so special.

LOL. Why don't I write? I don't know really. The H/D muse hadn't visited me before, but she arrived for this. And hit me over the head. With a flogger, apparently...

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[info]graylor
2007-09-01 03:34 am UTC (link)
*snerk* You should write more!

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[info]ravenqueen55
2007-09-01 03:45 am UTC (link)
Well, I'm glad you liked it! Your snerk made me giggle uncontrollably!!!

Love the knot icon...

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[info]weasleywench.livejournal.com
2007-09-01 03:41 am UTC (link)
OMG woman! That was great. :) Why don't you write more?

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[info]ravenqueen55
2007-09-01 03:48 am UTC (link)
Why thank you, my sweet weasleywench!!! I'm thrilled you enjoyed my kinkfest...

You can read my reply to Romaine re the writing...

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(no subject) - [info]weasleywench.livejournal.com, 2007-09-01 06:27 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 03:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]weasleywench, 2007-09-01 06:47 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 03:14 pm UTC

[info]parvani
2007-09-01 03:43 am UTC (link)
*gapes* ... You obviously need to write more, hun.

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[info]ravenqueen55
2007-09-01 03:49 am UTC (link)
What a great reaction!!! Thanks so much. I'm really glad you liked it. And perhaps the muse will visit again...she only stayed for a few minutes this time. I think I might have scared her away...*scratches head*

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(no subject) - [info]parvani, 2007-09-01 03:56 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 04:03 am UTC

[info]gryffindorj
2007-09-01 02:53 pm UTC (link)
LOL brilliant! You should really write more as this was pretty good.

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 02:58 pm UTC

[info]alaana_fair
2007-09-01 03:22 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I had to run and borrow an icon for this special occasion! Excellent job sweetie! I'm so proud of you!!!! *hugs*

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 03:29 pm UTC

[info]kudra_23
2007-09-01 04:21 pm UTC (link)
Woohoo!
You should write more often! I especially liked the last line, 'whatever it was, he fucking well wanted to do it again.' Utterly hot. :)

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 06:19 pm UTC

[info]melmoe1
2007-09-01 05:23 pm UTC (link)
Holy Cow, raven. Very nice; very hot. You should write more often. Wow, the visual in my head is wonderful. *g*

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 06:20 pm UTC

[info]inamac
2007-09-01 06:28 pm UTC (link)
Slut!

Oh indeed! You and Draco both (thatis a compliment, BTW).

Addictive, this writing lark, isn't it? (I hope - now that you've started on such a high note.)

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 06:40 pm UTC

[info]enchanted_jae
2007-09-01 06:37 pm UTC (link)
Mercy! *grins*

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 06:44 pm UTC

[info]eyesemerald
2007-09-01 07:46 pm UTC (link)
WOW!!!
I love it!!!
whatever it was, he fucking well wanted to do it again.
I'm still grinning...

You should invite your muse more often! What kind of challenge do you need?

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 09:55 pm UTC

[info]hambares
2007-09-01 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Kinky!

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 10:51 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]hambares, 2007-09-01 10:58 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-01 11:01 pm UTC

[info]elfflame
2007-09-02 04:06 am UTC (link)
Oh, yeah. That last line...just perfect. :D

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 04:48 am UTC

[info]quite_grey
2007-09-02 04:26 am UTC (link)
Hee hee, nice and kinky! Red bottoms are always a plus. ;)

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 04:52 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]quite_grey, 2007-09-02 06:07 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-03 12:29 pm UTC

[info]gold_loewin
2007-09-02 06:58 am UTC (link)
GUH, very hot! xD Yes, I agree, MORE, PLEEEASE! *makes puppy eyes*

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 12:51 pm UTC

[info]the_minx_17
2007-09-02 03:09 pm UTC (link)
WHOOO HOOO! Lovely, m'dear!

Thank you for the dedication- it is truly right up my alley! AND- *squishes you* thank you for playing with us. It was great, yeah?

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 04:57 pm UTC

[info]akuma_river
2007-09-02 08:31 pm UTC (link)
me wike me wike!

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 09:30 pm UTC

[info]quill_lumos
2007-09-02 09:32 pm UTC (link)
Oh very good!!!

Gods, what had he done to deserve this? He'd be sure to ask Harry later, because one thing was certain...whatever it was, he fucking well wanted to do it again. LOL!!

I loved it!

I have friended you btw, so that I can read more of your writing!

Lucie

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 09:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]quill_lumos, 2007-09-02 10:08 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 10:16 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]quill_lumos, 2007-09-02 10:33 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-03 12:34 pm UTC

[info]hpstrangelove
2007-09-02 11:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes - just my kind of fic...the last line makes it! I still can't stop laughing. Sure does change the tone too ;-)

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-02 11:33 pm UTC

[info]witchdragon
2007-09-03 01:18 am UTC (link)
Oh dear me- very hot.

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-09-03 01:43 am UTC

[info]lilsteves
2007-12-18 08:05 am UTC (link)
OHO!! This got my juices flowing...IN MY MIND I MEAN!! Don't be pervy *giggles*

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(no subject) - [info]ravenqueen55, 2007-12-18 11:45 am UTC


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